Effect: Remotely Coloring a Card with Crayons
Hey everyone!
I'm starting to post magic effects on my Instagram account, and I'd like to share one here that I filmed last week for anyone who wants to give me their thoughts, no matter what. Any constructive criticism is super helpful, so please don't hesitate to tell me what you'd improve 🙂
Thanks!
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Regarding the script: Try to eliminate the filler word "ummm" (I need to work on that myself). It's well-crafted and easy to understand. I think it's perfect for kids' magic.
The effect: I think it's really well done. If you can, try to film it with a spectator so we can see their reactions, and get them involved (using their imagination): "take the colors"... (they vanish), "color the car" (you set up the change)... "no, but really color it in!" (it changes), "put the colors back in the box" (they appear). Just thinking out loud, something along those lines.
Best,
@ricardorg2283 Thanks so much for the tips!
Man, I've been dealing with filler words for years, and not just in magic (I'm a trainer). Between all the "uhs" and "okay?"s, I pretty much fill half my patter with them 🤣
Cheers, and thanks again!
Hey, I thought that was really well-done and clear.
We want more!!
@elayudante I'm thrilled you enjoyed it 😊 I'll be posting more little by little!